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Something was strange.

Yumi could not put her finger on it, but she suddenly had the impression that something had changed. Her eyes looked around the girl's locker room, but then she shrugged it away. Probably imagination. It was kind of strange to be here this late at the campus pool. They normally went during the daytime, but Melissa had suggested tonight to do some late training. Up until 11pm, when the pool closed. Which had turned out to be quite fun. Nobody had been there. Well, almost nobody. Apart from the strange group of muscular and sporty guys, who had made thier endless, monotonous turns in the water, as if they were robots.

Or maybe they were some kind of police group, or soldiers, training for whatever mission. They surely had the look of it. Strange that they actually had gotten access to the campus pool then, Yumi thought. Grim guys, all muscles, no talking. Absolutely no emotions apart from they looks they cast at the two girls from time to time.

Yumi had hated those looks, they felt … creepy. As if the guys were judging them in some strange sort of way. Melissa however had enjoyed it, of course. Melissa always enjoyed it when guys were looking at her. She even winked at them smilingly, but the guys did not seem to notice, so Melissa eventually lost interest.

Melissa was still talking. Yumi really liked her friend, but sometimes, she could be very, very tiring. She rarely ever stopped talking - mostly about guys, and clothes, or shoes, of course.

"… he really did try, you know. but What did that guy think? Come on, I mean sure, he's cute and good looking and that, but why would he think that I'd ever kiss him. I'm not dating a guy who doesn't even have enough money to buy a car. That's what I told him, and right on the first day, when we met at the mall, where…, oh, did I tell you about where I found this red top? I told you, right? It's sooo damn hot, I'd say. It's a bit too tight, but it shows off my boobs really well! Peter and Martin will love it! Steve, too! I haven't called Steve in awhile, now that I think of it. Not after we… ah, well, anyway. And you know what Yumi, you really need a boyfriend. You haven't had a date since Marc, and Marc was a bore… Yumi?"

"What?", Yumi winced and tried to focus on what Melissa had said, but she had tuned her out. Sometimes it was simply the best idea to let Melissa talk, then ask for a summary later. "Yes, yes…", Yumi replied absent mindedly, and scrubbed the soap from her skin. Melissa was busy applying all sorts of conditioners, crèmes and lotions to her soft skin. Her friend had an amazing body, she always seemed to get the perfect tan - not too much, not too unnatural, a compliment to her long blond hair, which sometimes glimmered slightly red in the sun. Yumi cast a glance towards Melissa covered in foam and soap, and sighed softly. She would have killed to have Melissas perfect-shaped breasts. She didn't like her own breasts. They were a bit too small, and the shape was not symmetrical, she thought. Besides, after years on the swim team, her shoulders had gotten some muscles, which made her breasts even look smaller, in her opinion. Melissa though… she was perfect. No wonder the guys were drooling, once she entered a room. Swimsuit or dress, it didn't matter. Of course, and Melissa was quite picky with the guys.

"We better hurry up, Melissa. It's late already", Yumi said, stopping the shower. And as the last drop slowly dripped from the showerhead, she suddenly knew what had felt so strange before.

It was quiet.

When they had entered the girl's room, they had heard a group of pool attendants talking loudly, joking and tidying up the pool-area. Yumi had heard the group of the strange guys murmuring, and the splash of thier showers in the men's room. But suddenly, it seemed as if all the sounds out there had died. As if they were alone - the only sound was Melissas shower and her humming, as she shaved her legs under the hot, steamy water.

Had everyone finished so quickly? They had not been here that long.

Now, come to think of it, it almost seemed to Yumi that the sounds had stopped rather abruptly. At one point, the attendants were still talking, and then suddenly…

Yumi shivered and looked to the door. The lockers stood there in one line, like grey, silent watchers. The young Japanese woman felt very, very uncomfortable suddenly. She reached for her towel.

And suddenly, they were in the room.

CONTINUED ON :iconzedaine23: 's Page! :w00t:

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Sorry for the Repost folks - but :iconzedaine23: wrote an AMAZING story companion to it, and I felt she deserved some attention! =D

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ur not going anywhere